Learn It 10.3.3 Feedback in Messages

Giving Feedback to Customers

We have discussed the importance of happy, satisfied customers to the success of a business. But what if an issue arises that necessitates a critical message to an existing customer?

First, take a step back and think through several factors. What is the exact outcome we desire? How can we communicate firmly yet tactfully to maintain our good business relationship? What facts need to be included in the message?

The indirect strategy would be best for a critical message to a customer. Such a message should start with some complementary language about how the relationship is valued. Next, a full explanation of the facts of the matter and any context should be given. After this buffer, the criticism or critique should be revealed, followed by a warm closing.

To: Alang Cross

From: Kaileika Lang

Subject: Could I ask for your assistance on an important matter?

Dear Alang,

I hope this message finds you well. It is hard to believe that we have been doing business for over 10 years. The relationship between our companies has been mutually beneficial, and we hope to continue working with you for another decade.

As you may know, we have contracted out our finance department to a third-party company. They rely on a different financial system than the one we used in all of our prior dealings with your company. Apparently, the new system does not recognize your firm applying credit memos to our invoices directly. They must be entered as separate line items. As a result, several of our invoices to you are now showing as late or delinquent. Our finance folks and yours have had several calls on this matter, but your staff wants to continue the older process because it is easier for them. Yours is the only company that still maintains the old practice.

Perhaps you meeting with your CFO would go a long way to resolving this issue.

We look forward to working with you and your marketing team on our joint efforts at the June trade show. I feel positive about strengthening our relationship as business partners and the bright future ahead.

Best regards,

Kaileika Lang

VP of Finance

InnovaCraft Industries

This example message follows the indirect strategy for written feedback. The subject line gets attention but delays the bad news until after the buffer. The opening is pleasant and complimentary. The buffer attempts to explain the necessary facts and context. The bad news is passive voice (instead of: “Can I ask you to get involved directly to meet with your CFO to resolve this matter?”). The close avoids referring to the problem and instead has a pleasant, future-looking statement.