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Quoting<\/h2>\r\nNow that you've considered source integration broadly, let's focus on three key methods: quoting, paraphrasing, and summarizing. While you may be familiar with direct quotations, they should only be used in specific situations. Often, summarizing or paraphrasing is more effective.\r\n\r\nLet's examine when and how to use direct quotes.\r\n\r\n
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direct quotations<\/h3>\r\nA direct quotation<\/strong> is a word-for-word excerpt from a source, enclosed in quotation marks to indicate it is not your own original wording. When using direct quotations, introduce the author's name in the sentence to signal the source. Then, include the page number or relevant details in parentheses, following your essay\u2019s formatting style.\r\n\r\n<\/section>When writing papers that require the use of outside source material, it is often tempting to cite only direct quotations from your sources. The danger, however, is that your paper will become nothing more than a series of quotations linked together by a few connecting words. Your paper may seem to be a collection of others\u2019 thoughts, with little thinking on your part. To avoid falling into this trap, follow the tips outlined below.\r\n\r\n
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when to use direct quotations<\/h3>\r\nQuotations can lend credibility and evidence to your argument, but only if you use them properly. Be sure to:\r\n
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  • Avoid using long quotations merely as space fillers<\/strong>. While this is an attractive option when faced with a ten-page paper, the overuse of long quotations gives the reader the impression that you are not thinking for yourself.<\/li>\r\n \t
  • Don't use quotations to make your point for you<\/strong>. Readers should be able to skip the quotations in your paper and still understand all your main points.<\/li>\r\n \t
  • Use only as much of the quotation as you need.<\/strong> Excerpt from the source material and leave out any unnecessary words.<\/li>\r\n \t
  • When introducing direct quotations, try to use a variety of verbs in your signal phrases<\/strong>. Don\u2019t always rely on stock verbs such as \u201cstates\u201d or \u201csays.\u201d Think for a little while about the purpose of your quotation and then choose a context-appropriate verb.<\/li>\r\n \t
  • Finally, don\u2019t use only direct quotations<\/strong>. Try using paraphrases in addition to direct quotations. To the reader, the effective use of paraphrases indicates that you took the time to think about the meaning behind the quotation\u2019s words.<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\nDirect quotations should be used sparingly\u00a0and only with good reason! Some valid reasons for quoting include:\r\n
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    • When not using the author\u2019s exact wording would change the original meaning<\/li>\r\n \t
    • When the language of the quote is particularly significant<\/li>\r\n \t
    • To lend authority to the point you are trying to make<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/section>\r\n

      Quoting Words and Parts of Sentences<\/h3>\r\nAlthough you generally want to avoid using too many short quotes when you write, there are times when you need to quote just a word or a phrase as a part of your own sentence. Short phrases and single words should work smoothly with the structure of your own sentence.\r\n\r\n
      Look, for example, at the way the brief passages from Thoreau\u2019s Walden aid in the flow and credibility of this sentence:\r\n
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      • The demands of a market economy, in fact, would penalize a man who chose to give precedence to relationships and \u201ctrue integrity\u201d over labor: an over-emphasis on work leaves a man dehumanized and with \u201cno time to be anything but a machine\u201d (Thoreau 21).<\/span><\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/section>\r\n

        Block Quotations and Ellipses<\/h3>\r\nLong quotations should be kept to a minimum in your essay. Additionally, you should only use those parts of the long quotation that you really need. If a passage has a middle section that doesn\u2019t relate to the point you are making, drop it out and replace it with an ellipsis<\/strong> (\u2026) to indicate that you have left out part of the original text (see below).\r\n\r\nSet up long quotations in blocks; these are generally called block quotations. Block quotations are most often used if the passage takes up more than four typed lines in your paper. Indentation and spacing guidelines vary depending on the formatting style you are using (APA, MLA, Chicago, or other).\r\n\r\nLeave the quotation marks off of a block quotation. The indentation itself is the visual indicator to the reader that the text is a quote. Block quotations are usually introduced with a full sentence that summarizes the main point of the quotation. This introductory sentence should be followed by a colon, as in the example below.\r\n\r\n
        Henry David Thoreau argued in Walden that men who are over-occupied with labor run the risk of becoming dehumanized. They must be granted the time to learn about and address their own shortcomings in order to fully mature as humans:\r\n
        He has not time to be anything but a machine. How can he remember well his ignorance\u2013which his growth requires\u2013who has so often to use his knowledge? We should feed and clothe him gratuitously sometimes, and recruit him with our cordials, before we judge of him. The finest qualities of our nature, like the bloom on fruits, can be preserved only by the most delicate handling. (23)<\/blockquote>\r\nHere's the same block quote with an ellipsis to indicate the removal of a bit of unnecessary text from the source material. The use of an ellipsis is particularly effective if the original quotation includes unnecessary or potentially confusing language:\r\n
        He has not time to be anything but a machine. How can he remember well his ignorance . . . who has so often to use his knowledge? We should feed and clothe him gratuitously sometimes, and recruit him with our cordials, before we judge of him. The finest qualities of our nature, like the bloom on fruits, can be preserved only by the most delicate handling. (23)<\/blockquote>\r\n<\/section>It\u2019s important to remember that longer quotes should be set up and followed by commentary and analysis, just like shorter quotes. Be sure to provide some analysis after that quote to let your audience know why the quote is there and why it\u2019s important. Otherwise, long quotes can look and feel like \u201cfiller\u201d to your audience.\r\n

        Brackets<\/h3>\r\nIf you need to add information to make a quote clearer, you add brackets to show your reader which words you have added. Let's take a look at an example.\r\n\r\n
        Suppose you are including a quotation from an essay about the importance of finding a mentor in college. The particular sentence you are interested in reads as follows: \"There is nothing more important to your success during and after college\" (Purple 23). If you were to quote this sentence, the reader would have no idea what exactly is being recommended here. We could address this lack of clarity by adding information outside the quotation, but we could also use brackets to add clarifying information inside the quotation.\r\n
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        • \"There is nothing more important to your success during and after college\" (Purple 23) than finding a mentor.<\/li>\r\n \t
        • \"There is nothing more important [than finding a mentor] to your success during and after college\" (Purple 23).<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\nThe brackets here make clear that \"than finding a mentor\" are words we have added to the quotation.<\/em> The added words need to reflect and clarify the meaning of the original quotation, but they can also help make our use of the quotation more graceful.\r\n\r\nHere are a few other common uses for brackets:\r\n

          \"[N]othing,\" according to Purple, is \"more important to your success during and after college\" (23) than finding a mentor. Here the brackets make clear that the capital N to start the sentence is our own, not Purple's.<\/em><\/p>\r\n

          \"There is nothing more important to your [academic and career] success during and after college\" (Purple 23) than finding a mentor. Here we use the brackets to clarify what Purple means by success, again using our own words in brackets.\u00a0<\/em><\/p>\r\n\r\n<\/section>

          Be careful! [Brackets] are different from (parentheses). Don't get them mixed up! We use brackets when we are adding additional text, but parentheses for parenthetical citations of sources (which we'll be discussing later).<\/section>
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          Quoting<\/h2>\n

          Now that you’ve considered source integration broadly, let’s focus on three key methods: quoting, paraphrasing, and summarizing. While you may be familiar with direct quotations, they should only be used in specific situations. Often, summarizing or paraphrasing is more effective.<\/p>\n

          Let’s examine when and how to use direct quotes.<\/p>\n

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          direct quotations<\/h3>\n

          A direct quotation<\/strong> is a word-for-word excerpt from a source, enclosed in quotation marks to indicate it is not your own original wording. When using direct quotations, introduce the author’s name in the sentence to signal the source. Then, include the page number or relevant details in parentheses, following your essay\u2019s formatting style.<\/p>\n<\/section>\n

          When writing papers that require the use of outside source material, it is often tempting to cite only direct quotations from your sources. The danger, however, is that your paper will become nothing more than a series of quotations linked together by a few connecting words. Your paper may seem to be a collection of others\u2019 thoughts, with little thinking on your part. To avoid falling into this trap, follow the tips outlined below.<\/p>\n

          \n

          when to use direct quotations<\/h3>\n

          Quotations can lend credibility and evidence to your argument, but only if you use them properly. Be sure to:<\/p>\n

            \n
          • Avoid using long quotations merely as space fillers<\/strong>. While this is an attractive option when faced with a ten-page paper, the overuse of long quotations gives the reader the impression that you are not thinking for yourself.<\/li>\n
          • Don’t use quotations to make your point for you<\/strong>. Readers should be able to skip the quotations in your paper and still understand all your main points.<\/li>\n
          • Use only as much of the quotation as you need.<\/strong> Excerpt from the source material and leave out any unnecessary words.<\/li>\n
          • When introducing direct quotations, try to use a variety of verbs in your signal phrases<\/strong>. Don\u2019t always rely on stock verbs such as \u201cstates\u201d or \u201csays.\u201d Think for a little while about the purpose of your quotation and then choose a context-appropriate verb.<\/li>\n
          • Finally, don\u2019t use only direct quotations<\/strong>. Try using paraphrases in addition to direct quotations. To the reader, the effective use of paraphrases indicates that you took the time to think about the meaning behind the quotation\u2019s words.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n

            Direct quotations should be used sparingly\u00a0and only with good reason! Some valid reasons for quoting include:<\/p>\n

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            • When not using the author\u2019s exact wording would change the original meaning<\/li>\n
            • When the language of the quote is particularly significant<\/li>\n
            • To lend authority to the point you are trying to make<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/section>\n

              Quoting Words and Parts of Sentences<\/h3>\n

              Although you generally want to avoid using too many short quotes when you write, there are times when you need to quote just a word or a phrase as a part of your own sentence. Short phrases and single words should work smoothly with the structure of your own sentence.<\/p>\n

              Look, for example, at the way the brief passages from Thoreau\u2019s Walden aid in the flow and credibility of this sentence:<\/p>\n
                \n
              • The demands of a market economy, in fact, would penalize a man who chose to give precedence to relationships and \u201ctrue integrity\u201d over labor: an over-emphasis on work leaves a man dehumanized and with \u201cno time to be anything but a machine\u201d (Thoreau 21).<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/section>\n

                Block Quotations and Ellipses<\/h3>\n

                Long quotations should be kept to a minimum in your essay. Additionally, you should only use those parts of the long quotation that you really need. If a passage has a middle section that doesn\u2019t relate to the point you are making, drop it out and replace it with an ellipsis<\/strong> (\u2026) to indicate that you have left out part of the original text (see below).<\/p>\n

                Set up long quotations in blocks; these are generally called block quotations. Block quotations are most often used if the passage takes up more than four typed lines in your paper. Indentation and spacing guidelines vary depending on the formatting style you are using (APA, MLA, Chicago, or other).<\/p>\n

                Leave the quotation marks off of a block quotation. The indentation itself is the visual indicator to the reader that the text is a quote. Block quotations are usually introduced with a full sentence that summarizes the main point of the quotation. This introductory sentence should be followed by a colon, as in the example below.<\/p>\n

                Henry David Thoreau argued in Walden that men who are over-occupied with labor run the risk of becoming dehumanized. They must be granted the time to learn about and address their own shortcomings in order to fully mature as humans:<\/p>\n

                He has not time to be anything but a machine. How can he remember well his ignorance\u2013which his growth requires\u2013who has so often to use his knowledge? We should feed and clothe him gratuitously sometimes, and recruit him with our cordials, before we judge of him. The finest qualities of our nature, like the bloom on fruits, can be preserved only by the most delicate handling. (23)<\/p><\/blockquote>\n

                Here’s the same block quote with an ellipsis to indicate the removal of a bit of unnecessary text from the source material. The use of an ellipsis is particularly effective if the original quotation includes unnecessary or potentially confusing language:<\/p>\n

                He has not time to be anything but a machine. How can he remember well his ignorance . . . who has so often to use his knowledge? We should feed and clothe him gratuitously sometimes, and recruit him with our cordials, before we judge of him. The finest qualities of our nature, like the bloom on fruits, can be preserved only by the most delicate handling. (23)<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<\/section>\n

                It\u2019s important to remember that longer quotes should be set up and followed by commentary and analysis, just like shorter quotes. Be sure to provide some analysis after that quote to let your audience know why the quote is there and why it\u2019s important. Otherwise, long quotes can look and feel like \u201cfiller\u201d to your audience.<\/p>\n

                Brackets<\/h3>\n

                If you need to add information to make a quote clearer, you add brackets to show your reader which words you have added. Let’s take a look at an example.<\/p>\n

                Suppose you are including a quotation from an essay about the importance of finding a mentor in college. The particular sentence you are interested in reads as follows: “There is nothing more important to your success during and after college” (Purple 23). If you were to quote this sentence, the reader would have no idea what exactly is being recommended here. We could address this lack of clarity by adding information outside the quotation, but we could also use brackets to add clarifying information inside the quotation.<\/p>\n
                  \n
                • “There is nothing more important to your success during and after college” (Purple 23) than finding a mentor.<\/li>\n
                • “There is nothing more important [than finding a mentor] to your success during and after college” (Purple 23).<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n

                  The brackets here make clear that “than finding a mentor” are words we have added to the quotation.<\/em> The added words need to reflect and clarify the meaning of the original quotation, but they can also help make our use of the quotation more graceful.<\/p>\n

                  Here are a few other common uses for brackets:<\/p>\n

                  “[N]othing,” according to Purple, is “more important to your success during and after college” (23) than finding a mentor. Here the brackets make clear that the capital N to start the sentence is our own, not Purple’s.<\/em><\/p>\n

                  “There is nothing more important to your [academic and career] success during and after college” (Purple 23) than finding a mentor. Here we use the brackets to clarify what Purple means by success, again using our own words in brackets.\u00a0<\/em><\/p>\n<\/section>\n

                  Be careful! [Brackets] are different from (parentheses). Don’t get them mixed up! We use brackets when we are adding additional text, but parentheses for parenthetical citations of sources (which we’ll be discussing later).<\/section>\n