{"id":219,"date":"2025-04-17T16:35:13","date_gmt":"2025-04-17T16:35:13","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/content.one.lumenlearning.com\/englishcomp1\/chapter\/video-moving-from-outline-to-draft\/"},"modified":"2025-06-26T20:49:12","modified_gmt":"2025-06-26T20:49:12","slug":"video-moving-from-outline-to-draft","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/content.one.lumenlearning.com\/englishcomp1\/chapter\/video-moving-from-outline-to-draft\/","title":{"raw":"Drafting: Learn It 2","rendered":"Drafting: Learn It 2"},"content":{"raw":"<h2>Moving From Outline to Draft<\/h2>\r\nAn effective way to begin writing your first draft is to begin with your outline. Hopefully, during the prewriting stage, you've collected notes, evidence, and ideas. First, you'll want to organize these ideas into an outline for your paper and pick a working thesis statement. Follow the steps below to turn your outline into the first draft of your essay.\r\n<h3 class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\"><b>Step 1: Figure out your main points and create the headings for your outline<\/b><\/span><\/h3>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\"> Let's take a look at a very simple example\u2014imagine that you've already created an outline for a five-paragraph essay on \"why I love my dog.\" It might have the following headings:<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span class=\"s1\">I.\u00a0INTRODUCTION and THESIS: I love my dog because he is a good companion, well-behaved, and cute.<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span class=\"s1\">II. BODY PARAGRAPH 1: My Dog is\u00a0a Good Companion<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span class=\"s1\">III.\u00a0BODY PARAGRAPH 2:\u00a0My Dog is Well-Behaved<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span class=\"s1\">IV.\u00a0BODY PARAGRAPH 3: My Dog is Cute<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span class=\"s1\">V. CONCLUSION<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Since the topic is why I love my dog, each of the body paragraphs will present\u00a0a reason why you love your dog. Always make sure your main ideas directly relate to your topic and connect to the thesis statement.\u00a0<\/span><span class=\"s1\">Don\u2019t worry if you are not completely satisfied with the order; you can always change it later. <\/span><span class=\"s1\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\r\n\r\n<h3 class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\"><b>Step 2: Add your supporting ideas<\/b><\/span><\/h3>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">The next step is to fill in supporting ideas for each of your main ideas.<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">To continue the example above, a writer\u00a0might fill in part II of the outline as follows:<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span class=\"s1\">II. Body Paragraph 1: My Dog is a Good Companion<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 60px;\"><span class=\"s1\">A. My dog is\u00a0fun<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 90px;\"><span class=\"s1\">1. My dog likes to play<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 90px;\"><span class=\"s1\">2. My dog likes to go on walks<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 60px;\"><span class=\"s1\">B. My dog is\u00a0friendly<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 90px;\"><span class=\"s1\">1. My dog likes to\u00a0cuddle<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 90px;\"><span class=\"s1\">2. My dog likes people<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Give any necessary explanations, descriptions, evidence, or examples to convince the reader that you are making a good point. If you are using quotes, you can add\u00a0those to the outline. Remember to include the appropriate citation based on whichever format your teacher requires; having that information in your outline will speed things up when you write your paper (since you won\u2019t have to go hunting for\u00a0the bibliographic information) and make it easier to avoid plagiarism.<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">When you have finished adding supporting ideas, read through the outline to see if there are any areas you think your argument has holes or could be further fleshed out. Make sure that your ideas are in the most logical order. Don\u2019t be afraid to test out different orderings to see what makes the most sense!<\/span><\/p>\r\n\r\n<h3 class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\"><b>Step 3: Turn your headings and subheadings into complete sentences<\/b><\/span><\/h3>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">When writing a short to medium-length paper, each heading (or main idea) will typically correspond to one paragraph. For longer papers, each heading may be a section, and your first (or even second) level of subheading will eventually become your paragraphs. See how many sentences fall under each heading to get a rough idea of what correspondence makes the most sense for your paper.<\/span><span class=\"s1\">\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\r\n\r\n<h3 class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\"><b>Step 4: Construct your paragraphs<\/b><\/span><\/h3>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Next, start at the beginning of your outline and go through point by point. Start to put your sentences together into paragraphs. You may need to add transition phrases or even extra sentences to make sure your prose flows naturally. You might also find that even though your ideas made sense in an outline, you may need to add more details or change the order of your ideas. You may even find you have too many ideas or that some ideas are not relevant. That is perfectly normal. Remember, the outline is a plan to help you get organized, and you always have the flexibility to change it to fit the needs of your assignment.<\/span><\/p>\r\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Once you have finished turning your outline into paragraphs, you should have a decent first draft of your paper. Now you just need to proofread, revise, and repeat until you are ready to turn in your assignment!<\/span><\/p>\r\n\r\n<section class=\"textbox tryIt\" aria-label=\"Try It\">[ohm2_question]34390[\/ohm2_question]<\/section>","rendered":"<h2>Moving From Outline to Draft<\/h2>\n<p>An effective way to begin writing your first draft is to begin with your outline. Hopefully, during the prewriting stage, you&#8217;ve collected notes, evidence, and ideas. First, you&#8217;ll want to organize these ideas into an outline for your paper and pick a working thesis statement. Follow the steps below to turn your outline into the first draft of your essay.<\/p>\n<h3 class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\"><b>Step 1: Figure out your main points and create the headings for your outline<\/b><\/span><\/h3>\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\"> Let&#8217;s take a look at a very simple example\u2014imagine that you&#8217;ve already created an outline for a five-paragraph essay on &#8220;why I love my dog.&#8221; It might have the following headings:<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span class=\"s1\">I.\u00a0INTRODUCTION and THESIS: I love my dog because he is a good companion, well-behaved, and cute.<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span class=\"s1\">II. BODY PARAGRAPH 1: My Dog is\u00a0a Good Companion<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span class=\"s1\">III.\u00a0BODY PARAGRAPH 2:\u00a0My Dog is Well-Behaved<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span class=\"s1\">IV.\u00a0BODY PARAGRAPH 3: My Dog is Cute<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span class=\"s1\">V. CONCLUSION<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Since the topic is why I love my dog, each of the body paragraphs will present\u00a0a reason why you love your dog. 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My dog likes to play<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 90px;\"><span class=\"s1\">2. My dog likes to go on walks<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 60px;\"><span class=\"s1\">B. My dog is\u00a0friendly<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 90px;\"><span class=\"s1\">1. My dog likes to\u00a0cuddle<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 90px;\"><span class=\"s1\">2. My dog likes people<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">Give any necessary explanations, descriptions, evidence, or examples to convince the reader that you are making a good point. If you are using quotes, you can add\u00a0those to the outline. 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