{"id":1543,"date":"2025-04-29T22:02:16","date_gmt":"2025-04-29T22:02:16","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/content.one.lumenlearning.com\/englishcomp1\/?post_type=chapter&#038;p=1543"},"modified":"2025-07-07T22:22:21","modified_gmt":"2025-07-07T22:22:21","slug":"writing-essentials-get-stronger","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/content.one.lumenlearning.com\/englishcomp1\/chapter\/writing-essentials-get-stronger\/","title":{"raw":"Writing Essentials: Get Stronger","rendered":"Writing Essentials: Get Stronger"},"content":{"raw":"Let's review some of the key parts of writing we learned about in this module:\r\n\r\n<section class=\"textbox interact\" aria-label=\"Interact\"><iframe title=\"Elements of a Draft (Pre-Test 6)\" src=\"https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/writingforsuccessh5p\/wp-admin\/admin-ajax.php?action=h5p_embed&amp;id=86\" width=\"686\" height=\"589\" frameborder=\"0\" allowfullscreen=\"allowfullscreen\"><\/iframe><script 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charset=\"UTF-8\"><\/script><\/section>\r\n<h2>Active and Passive Voice<\/h2>\r\n<section class=\"textbox interact\" aria-label=\"Interact\">This interactive, originally from a business writing course, gives examples of when the passive voice may be preferred. <iframe src=\"https:\/\/lumenlearning.h5p.com\/content\/1290980040578381928\/embed\" width=\"1261\" height=\"735\" frameborder=\"0\" allowfullscreen=\"allowfullscreen\" aria-label=\"BComm\u2014Active Voice and Passive Voice\"><\/iframe><script src=\"https:\/\/lumenlearning.h5p.com\/js\/h5p-resizer.js\" charset=\"UTF-8\"><\/script><\/section><section class=\"textbox interact\" aria-label=\"Interact\">Practice identifying active and passive voice in the following interactive:\u00a0<iframe title=\"Recognizing Active and Passive Voice\" src=\"https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-admin\/admin-ajax.php?action=h5p_embed&amp;id=10\" width=\"614\" height=\"448\" frameborder=\"0\" 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aria-label=\"Interact\">Review this interactive to learn about how to structure an effective introduction:<iframe loading=\"lazy\" lang=\"en\" title=\"How to Write an Essay: Drafting the Introduction\" src=\"https:\/\/h5pstudio.ecampusontario.ca\/h5p\/7309\/embed\" width=\"829\" height=\"522\" frameborder=\"0\" allowfullscreen=\"allowfullscreen\"><\/iframe><script src=\"https:\/\/h5pstudio.ecampusontario.ca\/modules\/contrib\/h5p\/vendor\/h5p\/h5p-core\/js\/h5p-resizer.js\" charset=\"UTF-8\"><\/script><\/section>\n<section aria-label=\"Interact\"><\/section>\n<h2 aria-label=\"Interact\">Transitions<\/h2>\n<section class=\"textbox interact\" aria-label=\"Interact\">Practice using transition words in the following interactive:<br \/>\n<iframe loading=\"lazy\" title=\"Transitional Phrases\" src=\"https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-admin\/admin-ajax.php?action=h5p_embed&amp;id=37\" width=\"614\" height=\"636\" frameborder=\"0\" 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