{"id":1278,"date":"2025-04-23T23:56:04","date_gmt":"2025-04-23T23:56:04","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/content.one.lumenlearning.com\/englishcomp1\/?post_type=chapter&#038;p=1278"},"modified":"2025-06-29T18:54:02","modified_gmt":"2025-06-29T18:54:02","slug":"revision-strategies-fresh-take","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/content.one.lumenlearning.com\/englishcomp1\/chapter\/revision-strategies-fresh-take\/","title":{"raw":"Revision Strategies: Fresh Take","rendered":"Revision Strategies: Fresh Take"},"content":{"raw":"<section class=\"textbox learningGoals\" aria-label=\"Learning Goals\">\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li><span data-sheets-root=\"1\">Revise for rhetorical context<\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li><span data-sheets-root=\"1\">Revise for style and wordiness<\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li><span data-sheets-root=\"1\">Revise for structure, using strategies like a reverse outline<\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li><span data-sheets-root=\"1\">Review and revise claims (or evidence) in a work of 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