{"id":1208,"date":"2025-04-23T22:59:08","date_gmt":"2025-04-23T22:59:08","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/content.one.lumenlearning.com\/englishcomp1\/?post_type=chapter&#038;p=1208"},"modified":"2025-06-26T20:37:32","modified_gmt":"2025-06-26T20:37:32","slug":"writing-strong-sentences-fresh-take","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/content.one.lumenlearning.com\/englishcomp1\/chapter\/writing-strong-sentences-fresh-take\/","title":{"raw":"Writing Strong Sentences: Fresh Take","rendered":"Writing Strong Sentences: Fresh Take"},"content":{"raw":"<section class=\"textbox learningGoals\" aria-label=\"Learning Goals\">\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li><span data-sheets-root=\"1\">Explain techniques for writing effective sentences<\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li><span data-sheets-root=\"1\">Identify and use active voice in your writing<\/span><\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/section>\r\n<h2>Parallel Structure<\/h2>\r\n<section class=\"textbox watchIt\" aria-label=\"Watch It\">Watch this video to learn how to 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